TIME time(limerick)

Written by kanchana at

October 26, 2009 (8:43 pm)

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Tried to time, time

On time, I hear the chime ,did succeed notime

With rat race, big chase, every moment a different phase;

Against time , lost always,

Fleetingly ,Once I won, when the battery did whine.

Comment by Ray on 26 October, 2009 @ 10:17 pm

Very clever loved it

kanchana Reply:
October 27th, 2009 at 12:19 pm

@Ray, thankyou sir

Comment by Vishvnand on 27 October, 2009 @ 10:42 am

Liked very much.
Time is money,
This one on time is honey.

kanchana Reply:
October 27th, 2009 at 12:19 pm

@Vishvnand, thankyou sir

Comment by medhini on 27 October, 2009 @ 2:36 pm

Nice one, Kanchana. Liked it
very much.

kanchana Reply:
October 27th, 2009 at 5:09 pm

@medhini, thankyou ma’am.

Comment by Priyal on 6 November, 2009 @ 1:47 pm

Tried to time, time.

The thought is so beyond, Im not over it still…

kanchana Reply:
November 6th, 2009 at 8:32 pm

@Priyal, thanx priyal

kanchana s