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You,My Krishna
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Absorbing you in my soul
I take a flight to a divine land
My heart is what you stole
Alive only in your presence
Longing to merge in your essence
Your divine touch….am forgiven all my sins
Swaying to your beat, I dance
Intoxicated, moving in a trance
You are my Krishna
I fall at your feet
And surrender completely
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Very beautiful, very enchanting.
The whole poem is so vibrating.
“Enchanting flute pervading the senses
Absorbing you in my soul”
Is that you writing or something
that has emanated directly from Meera’s soul.
Kudos.
Its short and has your style written on it all the way through
You need to now try the other styles as well……………………..especially like the rhyming ones…………….
Stars = 5
renu rakheja Reply:
August 19th, 2009 at 12:19 pm
@ULHAS, Hi Ulhas- Previously I used to write only in rhyming style- will post some of my old poems
Direly devotional and direct driving towards Lord Krishna – the poem is
quite exciting and calls for repeated reciting. 5-stars yet need be super-
scribed, as their space is smallerly prescribed.
ashwini kumar goswami.
Your love for Krishna has mesmerised me through your beautiful poem. I have noted this from the heart poem.
I am water
Sometimes solid...you can always depend on
Sometimes liquid...fits in anywhere
Sometimes vapor...ephemeral...I am there and then I am gone
Sometimes ice...but can be dissolved by fire
Sometimes swirling ....with passion
Sometimes tranquil ....with still desire
Always flowing....unaware of the destination
Sometimes vivid ....like blue sapphire
Always pure....see your reflection
Always rising ...wanting to go higher
http://renunrajsblog.blogspot.com/
Lovely!
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