May be poetry is something you write on topics you feel from within, but I love writing something which doesnt come from within and always contradict myself everytime. I love playing with words and make a nice Jigsaw out of them.
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Ulhas,
“simple English”?. Tried reading it on my mobile and gave up on the coloured fonts. Read it again and again on line and found it hard to understand. It exudes feeling in the repeated reading. The imagery is challenging to understand.
On final reading I feel each verse is a poem in its own right. Intense but sensitive. Verses 5 and 8 are just beautiful, family makes a house a home,
Gion
1st – Soon the red skies in longining for the sea below, you set in the twilight orange color.
2nd – Soon the stars in a sparkling star fleet waits for the moon to rise.
3rd – Soon the Hard working men set out of home for loaf/bread would want to return back to bed.
4th – Soon the Small Birds would want to return to their mother waiting anxiously.
5th – Soon the wings that cross borders would take the wishes of friends who are divided by borders on either side. AS only birds have a freedom and men dont, so the birds will take their wishes and words across the meshed border.
6th – Soon the thoughts and views wait for their sire’s (thinkers) mind to come to a decision and spill it out for the betterment of the thinker
7th – Similarly the home also waits for you to come back and make it a home again.
A tough poem but beautiful & a bundle of joy when interpretation is understood,
Fully identify with Gion Gion’s observation on the poem so aptly put.
Ulhas, commendation & kudos for this fine & enlightening effort of yours.
1st – Soon the red skies in longining for the sea below, you set in the twilight orange color.
2nd – Soon the stars in a sparkling star fleet waits for the moon to rise.
3rd – Soon the Hard working men set out of home for loaf/bread would want to return back to bed.
4th – Soon the Small Birds would want to return to their mother waiting anxiously.
5th – Soon the wings that cross borders would take the wishes of friends who are divided by borders on either side. AS only birds have a freedom and men dont, so the birds will take their wishes and words across the meshed border.
6th – Soon the thoughts and views wait for their sire’s (thinkers) mind to come to a decision and spill it out for the betterment of the thinker
7th – Similarly the home also waits for you to come back and make it a home again.
A nice sweet poem. The deep yearn
to come home is well expressed.
gud rite
i loved it
Ulhas,
“simple English”?. Tried reading it on my mobile and gave up on the coloured fonts. Read it again and again on line and found it hard to understand. It exudes feeling in the repeated reading. The imagery is challenging to understand.
On final reading I feel each verse is a poem in its own right. Intense but sensitive. Verses 5 and 8 are just beautiful, family makes a house a home,
Gion
@Gion Gion,
The Poem means as below:
1st – Soon the red skies in longining for the sea below, you set in the twilight orange color.
2nd – Soon the stars in a sparkling star fleet waits for the moon to rise.
3rd – Soon the Hard working men set out of home for loaf/bread would want to return back to bed.
4th – Soon the Small Birds would want to return to their mother waiting anxiously.
5th – Soon the wings that cross borders would take the wishes of friends who are divided by borders on either side. AS only birds have a freedom and men dont, so the birds will take their wishes and words across the meshed border.
6th – Soon the thoughts and views wait for their sire’s (thinkers) mind to come to a decision and spill it out for the betterment of the thinker
7th – Similarly the home also waits for you to come back and make it a home again.
Coming home is a dellightfull freedom.
A tough poem but beautiful & a bundle of joy when interpretation is understood,
Fully identify with Gion Gion’s observation on the poem so aptly put.
Ulhas, commendation & kudos for this fine & enlightening effort of yours.
@Vishvnand,
Thanks VishVanandji –
The Poem means as below:
1st – Soon the red skies in longining for the sea below, you set in the twilight orange color.
2nd – Soon the stars in a sparkling star fleet waits for the moon to rise.
3rd – Soon the Hard working men set out of home for loaf/bread would want to return back to bed.
4th – Soon the Small Birds would want to return to their mother waiting anxiously.
5th – Soon the wings that cross borders would take the wishes of friends who are divided by borders on either side. AS only birds have a freedom and men dont, so the birds will take their wishes and words across the meshed border.
6th – Soon the thoughts and views wait for their sire’s (thinkers) mind to come to a decision and spill it out for the betterment of the thinker
7th – Similarly the home also waits for you to come back and make it a home again.
Coming home is a dellightfull freedom.