It’s Her!!
With a subtle innocence on her face…
With an enchanting charm in her ways…
She fills my heart with delight…
And makes everything feel right…
With a captivating glitter in her eyes…
With a childlike tone…oh so cute and nice…
And with a nature incredibly sweet and kind…
She has encapsulated my mind…
With a delicate voice…oh so sweet sounding…
With those gorgeous curls…really astounding…
And an adorable blush on her face…
She eases me of my troubles without a trace…
With a million dollar worth smile…
Which stays on her face all the while…
And with an elegance…oh so very lovable…
She makes life all worthwhile and able…
With every little thing she does…
Every little thing she says…
With every single moment spent with her…
She makes me feel over and over again
Without her life would be all in vain!!!

(3 votes, average: 4.67 out of 5, rated)
Im an average 20 year old...Doing my B-tech from Bits-Pilani, Goa....Love writing poetry....Basically like to write my heart out....!
A very beautiful poem. Liked immensely.
With so many “with withs” and what each with contains, its nice flow & rhyming, the poem entertains the reader with elegance.
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ajusal Reply:
July 24th, 2009 at 3:43 pm
@Vishvnand, Thank you soo much
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