“Danger”
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Loading ...What thoughts are these that enter my mind?
To acknowledge them is to be kind,
Sleep to me is now a stranger,
For I find myself in danger.
I feel inside I lost my soul,
I am like a mass without any goal,
Where is the energy in my entity?
Lost is my self identity.
Am I becoming like the others?
People don’t care no one bothers.
Have I forgotten what it is to “be”?
Is this my life, is this “me”?
This snake of fear has gripped my brain,
I try to break free, my body I strain,
But I shall keep trying and not give in,
For giving up is an unforgivable sin.
I have struggled and I have won,
The snake is dead, my job is done,
And I have finally awoken,
I live once more, I have begun!
7 Comments
good and impressive style…………….I like it………………
Stars = 5…………The ending few lines really sum it up…………….
Great…………………………………….
Beautiful poem. Liked the feelings in it immensely.
Shall I write what I felt after reading this poem, really,
You brought about this situation by thinking unnecessarily,
And now you have found the solution by thinking what was necessary,
You will find what I am writing is confusing, but only momentarily.
the best feeling in the world
“And I have finally awoken,
I live once more, I have begun!”
Well thought and penned.
thanks Gion
great read
Lost is my self identity.
Am I becoming like the others?
People don’t care no one bothers.
Have I forgotten what it is to “be”?
Is this my life, is this “me”?
Hello all,
I think my poetry will speak volumes about me.
Thanks.
Brilliant.. This very good, simple yet effective…
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