A snap of yours !!!
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Loading ...I wish you were
sitted relaxedly on that chair,
and I could take my own sweet time
to paint what I see before.
Yeah !This is not you;
just a snap of yours,
but how do I believe?
My eyes are not worthy of either.
The ambiance looks refreshing
as if promising to live for ever;
the beautiful greenery, the old wooden bridge
and tbe still blue water.
Do you feel I have forgotten
to notice you among the beautiful nature?
Oh ! C’mmon ! I am just fearing
my attempts of multiple failures.
So mysteriously attractive is your demeanour
with the privileged black that you have chosen to wear.
Just one look at your shining smile
and then I don’t agree to it anymore.
Everything around you
has become so graciously yours;
I just wish I were
on the other side of the picture.
A techie by profession,
and write out of compulsion,
for the killing need of expression,
when something just can't be told over a phone.
I wish i see the light and happily explain,
but still there is a lot of pain, lot of burden !
The desire to be close, to be able to catch the evasive, very nicely portrayed. The longing to be near is catchy.
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lostnfound Reply:
June 28th, 2009 at 11:33 pm
@parminder,
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