Wish me luck…
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It could be a deep forest,
journey never travelled before.
A dive into the deep blue sea,
light failed to penetrate ever.
It could be a stranger unknown,
acquaintance trying to forge relation.
It could be a make or break situation,
wherein lie my fate yet to shape up.
It could be an earnest prayer,
where it’s fruits is pure revelation.
It could be a wall that blocks,
my vision now so very curious.
All I can do is enter to explore,
with hope and faith as my strength.
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Krishna,
Liked it, very nice Poem
What is unknown,
Has to be explored,
With hope & faith as strength,
And with all resources known or unknown,
In the process by & by
Unknown reveals as known,
So also the resources,
Which were formerly unknown
Krishna,
very good write, imagery,flow,rhyme, ideas and well ended.
“It could be a…” an invitation to all.
“All I can do is enter to explore,
with hope and faith as my strength.” The most reliable sea chart or road map!
hmmmmmmmmmmm……………..Style hein………………..
Stars = 4…………….It could be anything……………..Best of luck to you……
I am not what I say but what you perceive...
I am not what I give but what you receive.//
I am just a normal young fellow,
I am my true self when I am mellow.///
Revealing my self in my thoughts,
telling my state in varied words.//
At the end of the day I am here to fade away,
it's just a matter of time before I sway.///
To be dead and gone,
into oblivion all alone.//
Would leave behind these roads,
traces of me in the form of words.///
interesting poem Krishna
very different way of presentation
liked it immensely
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