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Make it hard, make it last

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The energy in abundance they posses
Like juice filled in cactus
While aged wither in desert
The youth flourish in competitive heat.

Sun shows the path through light
Their goals to keep in sight
Sand storm may mask the view
But in life it is nothing new.

So take uncompromising stance
For success to sense
By making it hard, making it last
Your spirit will live on for others to taste.

2 Comments

  1. ULHAS says:

    Good………………….

  2. Gion Gion says:

    “By making it hard, making it last
    Your spirit will live on for others to taste.”
    I liked these lines. To me they seemed to double the meaning of the poem,
    Gion

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