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Nothing To Give

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When you in flesh and blood live
And your force pulls me towards you
Like Sun keeping the planets in motion
Guiding in an axis when I collapse by emotions.

In sadness of the night
You bring joy from Moon light
And in hope filled day
With light you make way.

Although you face eclipse
By your majestic character you climb steps
From your presence when all this I receive
Nothig more you need to give.

4 Comments

  1. Parespeare says:

    nice flow

  2. dhananjay says:

    very nice read…..

  3. Vishvnand says:

    Nice poem but leaves you guessing.

  4. Gion Gion says:

    “Although you face eclipse
    By your majestic character you climb steps
    From your presence when all this I receive
    Nothig more you need to give.”
    “you” or “your”?, “nothig” to nothing.
    Feels good but I cant say I understand. Leaves me thinking and guessing

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