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A New Way Of Life
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Loading ...For my daughter and myself on Mother’s Day
As the nightingale sings its song
And the serpent slides into where it belongs
The fox after its feast gets up and yawns
The cuckoo croons and sings to the swans
I walk in the woods where the spring has awakened
The wild flowers blossom,colours emblazoned
I ask myself, what did I do to have found you
What will I have to do to keep you, my dew
To have luck continue my way
You are my love, you are my jay
I dreamt of you and made you my reality
And then put an end to my duality
I love the sight of you
You have made my life anew
I live to see you laugh, to hold your hand
To see you sleep, to be your magic wand
You please me more everyday
Life has shown me a new way
O Wind, please continue to blow my way
Life without her will be dark and gray
She is like a vision to the blind
Solution to all riddles you will find
My love for her is as measureless as the sky
Will never let you go or I shall die
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Renu, this is beautiful. Wish i had written it. This why my eldert child and only is named for Light
Awww such sweet lines to your lovely daughter
O Wind, please continue to blow my way
Life without her will be dark and gray.
Wow! Such beautiful lines for mom and the little one. Depicts so well how the world shrinks to ONE little being.
renu rakheja Reply:
May 11th, 2009 at 12:52 pm
Yea- I am sure now y our world will shrink to your grandson/daughter 
You are a true story-teller and it shows in your poems!! I’m sure ‘she’ loved this one!
Excellent, an ode
Excellent, an ode
Excellent, an ode Anglice, save several metrical excesses in our voice !
Even then its English very nice, so as to read it twice or thrice !
Why then left some space in fifth star, though the poem is a bit above par ?
a.k. goswami.
anglic
brilliant and beautiful! a mother’s love is a shield for a child from most of life’s trouble (: i wrote a poem about my mother, will post it here very soon<3
godbless you& your daughter! 5 stars!
I am water
Sometimes solid...you can always depend on
Sometimes liquid...fits in anywhere
Sometimes vapor...ephemeral...I am there and then I am gone
Sometimes ice...but can be dissolved by fire
Sometimes swirling ....with passion
Sometimes tranquil ....with still desire
Always flowing....unaware of the destination
Sometimes vivid ....like blue sapphire
Always pure....see your reflection
Always rising ...wanting to go higher
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A beautiful ode to a daughter from a mother who is relishing the joys of motherhood and enjoying the most beautiful experience in the world to its fullest…
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renu rakheja Reply:
May 10th, 2009 at 2:45 pm
Thanks Seema-
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