Theft (Haiku)
Written by renu rakheja at
March 31, 2009 (3:33 pm)
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Loading ...The wind stole my thoughts
Have you seen them anywhere?
Send back if you do
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Its always a pleasure to read Haiku and this one of yours is really nice…..
Your Haiku is fine
I cant find your thoughts anywhere
So you can have mine
renu rakheja Reply:
April 1st, 2009 at 7:10 pm
thanks seema- always a pleasure to read your haiku replies 
Wow, very nice. You have a unique style.
Why would they steal your thoughts
When only problems they have brought
Look again into your heart.
renu rakheja Reply:
April 1st, 2009 at 7:09 pm
mere khayaal kuch paagal hain- jab dekho gum ho jaate hain!
Very thoughtful haiku.
Wind has stolen your thoughts,
And your haiku has mine….!
In search of thoughts that are yours…!
I am water
Sometimes solid...you can always depend on
Sometimes liquid...fits in anywhere
Sometimes vapor...ephemeral...I am there and then I am gone
Sometimes ice...but can be dissolved by fire
Sometimes swirling ....with passion
Sometimes tranquil ....with still desire
Always flowing....unaware of the destination
Sometimes vivid ....like blue sapphire
Always pure....see your reflection
Always rising ...wanting to go higher
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Renu ji,
wind has not stolen your thoughts
they are always around you
and if no one has stolen your thoughts then what is the need to depend on others for sending them back to you
even in the light
or even in the dark
see in the soul
shake hands
with your thoughts
small but very impressive lines-congratulations
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renu rakheja Reply:
April 1st, 2009 at 7:10 pm
thanks sushil ji
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