Opium ( Haiku)
Written by renu rakheja at
March 31, 2009 (3:37 pm)
(1 votes, average: 5.00 out of 5, rated)
Loading ...You,my opium
Intoxicate me fully
Who wants any senses?
11 Comments
beautiful stroke as ever. sadly though we always wish to give up our senses but alas no takers!
renu rakheja Reply:
April 1st, 2009 at 7:13 pm
we would be proclaimed ‘insane’ by this world if we give away our senses- aha but what a beautiful world it would be
i admire ur Haikus Renu ma’am
still not written a single short poem or Haiku till date
-:)
renu rakheja Reply:
April 1st, 2009 at 7:14 pm
try one Parikshit- its very simple- just 5/7/5 syllables in each line
I am water
Sometimes solid...you can always depend on
Sometimes liquid...fits in anywhere
Sometimes vapor...ephemeral...I am there and then I am gone
Sometimes ice...but can be dissolved by fire
Sometimes swirling ....with passion
Sometimes tranquil ....with still desire
Always flowing....unaware of the destination
Sometimes vivid ....like blue sapphire
Always pure....see your reflection
Always rising ...wanting to go higher
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Renu jee, you have shown the extreme of inner sense in these lines-very beautiful-liked it
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renu rakheja Reply:
April 1st, 2009 at 7:12 pm
Thanks Sushil ji
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