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मेरे पास तुम खडी हो ….!
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This is composed as a situational love song (A Hindi Geet)
An individual, who’s beloved, had betrayed and gone away from him long time back, sends an intimation wanting to meet him and at the appointed time has come and is standing near him. The song addresses the feelings of the individual in this situation.
The song is posted with its pod cast to acquaint with the tune in which the song had emerged, although it can be sung in any other tune too.
मेरे पास तुम खडी हो ….!
मेरे पास तुम खडी हो, और सोच में पडी हो,
उलझन है कोई मुश्किल, कुछ कहना चाहती हो ..
मेरे पास तुम खडी हो ….!
तुम सोचती हो शायद, रूठा हुआ हूँ तुझसे,
बीते हुए दिनों का, पूछूँगा कुछ तो तुझसे,
ना तुझसे कुछ पूछूँगा, तुम जो समझ रही हो ….
मेरे पास तुम खडी हो ….!
तूने मुझसे मिलना चाहा, जबसे पता चला है,
कैसे तुझे बताऊँ, मेरे दिल का हाल क्या है,
लगा दिल के हर चमन में, हर इक कली खिली हो
मेरे पास तुम खडी हो ….!
मैंने प्यार जो किया था, भूला नहीं कभी मैं,
तेरे प्यार की हिफाजत, करता रहा था मन में,
ये असर मेरी दुआ का, फिर तुम मुझे मिली हो,
मेरे पास तुम खडी हो ….!
मेरे पास तुम खडी हो, और सोच में पडी हो,
उलझन है कौन मुश्किल, कहदो जो चाहती हो
अब पास क्यूँ खडी हो …..!
—- ” विश्व नन्द ” —-
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मैंने प्यार जो किया था, भूला नहीं कभी मैं,
तेरे प्यार की हिफाजत, करता रहा था मन में,
ये असर मेरी दुआ का, फिर तुम मुझे मिली हो,
मेरे पास तुम खडी हो ….!
maza aa gya.tere pyar kee hifazet krta rha mn main ek adbhut anubhootee ka ehsas sratee huee pnktee hai.ek khoobsoort rchna, bdhai
Vishvnand Reply:
March 9th, 2009 at 6:49 pm
Sushil ji,
Is geet par aapke comments padhkar bahut khushii hui. Shukriyaa.
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Vishvnand Reply:
March 9th, 2009 at 6:57 pm
Dr ji,
Aapkii prashansaa se bahut khushii hui. hardik dhanyavaad.
Pahale photo me, mere sath meri wife aur vo bachche hamare grandsons hain. meri daughter ki farmaish our order par maine us photo ke badale me ye load kiyaa hai aur kuch din baad badal doongaa.
bahut sundar kavita hai VishVnandji
-:)
Vishvnand Reply:
March 9th, 2009 at 6:59 pm
Parespeare,
Hameshaa ki tarah aapke comment aur encouragement ke liye bahut dhanyavaad.
lajawab sabd nahi hai mere pass
Vishvnand Reply:
March 9th, 2009 at 9:25 pm
Rajdeep, Afalaatoon comment.
Mere paas bahut saare shabd hain aapko haardik dhanyavaad dene ke liye, jo main jamaa kiye jaa rahaa huun. Abhii to sirf Dhanyavaad hii kah rahaa huun,
A beautiful and true thoughts on the given condition. I specially liked -
“तुम सोचती हो शायद, रूठा हुआ हूँ तुझसे,
बीते हुए दिनों का, पूछूँगा कुछ तो तुझसे,
ना तुझसे कुछ पूछूँगा, तुम जो समझ रही हो ….
मेरे पास तुम खडी हो ….!”
This is actually true love which always thinks of pain of counterpart but not him/herself.
Vishvnand Reply:
March 10th, 2009 at 4:00 pm
Raj,
Thanks very much for your comment. You have rightly covered the most important basis of true love for someone, that you accept totally and love the person as he is, moment to moment. No if’s and but’s.
Sach, pyar ki dua mein bahut asar hota hai. Bahut khoob, Sir.
Vishvnand Reply:
March 10th, 2009 at 4:07 pm
Thank you Sangeeta. Yes, True love is always a boon, for it invokes in you a panorama of feelings, experience of which is nothing different from enlightenment & real happiness.
Anubhaw se Jadi 1 sunder geet hai sir
Vishvnand Reply:
March 10th, 2009 at 4:08 pm
Thank you Ravi, very much for your comment & observation.
एक शानदार रोमांटिक रचना है.बहुत ही प्यार से लिखी हुई और बहुत ही प्यार से भरी हुई.कम्पोजीशन भी शानदार है.पढने और सुनने दोनों में मज़ा आया.
विश्व जी, बहुत दिन बाद आपकी कविता पढ़ rahi हूँ और khub aanand आया . गीत sunkar pankaj malik याद aa गए | बहुत khoob |
Retired senior engineering, marketing & operations management Executive with Passion for & deeply interested in reading & listening to all varieties of poetry & songs and in particular those rendered in Hindi/Hindustani. Also interested in & loves reciting & rendering his own poems/compositions & songs on various subjects, composing tunes for songs and singing. Loves to & adept at playing Harmonium as accompaniment to singing & also as accompaniment to others performing.
.......Location: Pune & Mumbai
मैंने प्यार जो किया था, भूला नहीं कभी मैं,
तेरे प्यार की हिफाजत, करता रहा था मन में,
ये असर मेरी दुआ का, फिर तुम मुझे मिली हो,
मेरे पास तुम खडी हो ….!
wah kya baat hai sir.
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Vishvnand Reply:
March 9th, 2009 at 6:41 pm
Kalawati ji
आपके comment का बहुत शुक्रिया
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kalawati Reply:
March 9th, 2009 at 7:09 pm
sir aap mere naam ke aage ji na lagaye plzzzzzzzzzzz
aapki kavita ke baare me kuch kahna suraj ko deepak dikhana hai.
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Vishvnand Reply:
March 9th, 2009 at 8:04 pm
kalavwati,
Noted. aage aisaa hii hogaa.
Lekin apanii p4poetry site par ham ek samaan sab deepak hii to hain,(suuraj nahiin), jo kavitaa devi kii aaradhanaa me usi kii pratibhaa se prajwalit hain aur useekii aaraadhanaa me jute hue hain. Koi badaa nahiin koi chotaa nahiin. Sab pyaare saathii hain. Yahii satya hai. Yahii bahut badaa bhaagya bhii hai aur aisaa meraa vishwaas hai. aur aapkaa bhii jaroor hogaa. Dhanyavaad.
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Swayam Prabha Misra Reply:
March 9th, 2009 at 9:23 pm
Vishvji, Aapka yahi baddapan hi to aapko suraj kahne ko majboor kar deta hai:-)
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