Undefeated Life
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Every despairingly devastating darkness that you
encountered in your way; eventually proves to be an
irrefutable way; victoriously leading you to the
corridor of optimistically scintillating brilliance,
Every horrendously diabolical impediment that you
encountered in your way; eventually proves to be an
unconquerable ray; blissfully unfurling into the
paradise of everlastingly blossoming prosperity,
Every viciously traumatic whirlwind that you
encountered in your way; eventually proves to be an
invincible messiah; insatiably propelling you on the
path of magnificently tranquil euphoria,
Every tyrannically debilitating disease that you
encountered in your way; eventually proves to be an
impregnable elixir; ebulliently making you enjoy every
instant of rhapsodically redolent life,
Every stinkingly dilapidated gutter that you
encountered in your way; eventually proves to be a
reinvigorating garden; celestially inundating every
aspect of your beleaguered life with insurmountably
unending freshness,
Every morbidly stony wall that you encountered in your
way; eventually proves to be a resplendent sky;
vibrantly enshrouding your haplessly shattered senses
with bountiful timelessness,
Every sardonically cynical abuse that you encountered
in your way; eventually proves to be a unassailable
fortress of solidarity; bestowing you with the
tenacity to perennially flower in the chapter of
mystically replenishing existence,
Every brutally savage kick that you encountered in
your way; eventually proves to be an unflinching path
to blazing success; embracing each iota of your
miserably dwindling existence; with overwhelmingly
unsurpassable fortitude,
Every satanic whirlpool of tears that you encountered
in your way; eventually proves to be a waterfall of
everlasting jubilation; perpetuating each of your
drearily dolorous nerves with the; mantra of
altruistic contentment,
Every dungeon of horrifically salacious boredom that
you encountered in your way; eventually proves to be a
blanket of compassionately enthralling enthusiasm;
becoming your most invaluably glorious asset to; soar
high each instant of life,
Every indiscriminately uncouth rejection that you
encountered in your way; eventually proves to be an
astoundingly panoramic rainbow of triumph; with the
entire Universe saluting your; inherently benevolent
prowess,
Every coldblooded meal of stone that you encountered
in your way; eventually proves to be a ravishingly
eternal fruit of Nature’s euphoric creation; divinely
pacifying your savagely frazzled demeanor,
Every grotesquely ghastly distortion that you
encountered in your way; eventually proves to be an
island of exhilarating charisma; blessing each of your
barbarically anguished veins; with magically
miraculous enchantment,
Every sordidly frigid avalanche of ice that you
encountered in your way; eventually proves to be a
poignant entrenchment of amiable sharing; enlightening
your life with the most gregariously sacrosanct
religion of; eternal mankind,
Every worthlessly devilish slap that you encountered
in your way; eventually proves to be an ocean of
unassailable accolade; majestically rewarding you for
your; intrepidly unstoppable and benign perseverance,
Every ominously malicious hostility that you
encountered in your way; eventually proves to be a
gloriously marvelous dusk of victory; beamingly
bequeathing upon you the never-dying spirit of;
timeless survival,
Every painstakingly feeble globule of sweat that you
encountered in your way; eventually proves to be the
scent of astronomical courage; unequivocally
escalating you into the clouds of; bloomingly
unshakable success,
Every disdainfully disgusting dirt that you
encountered in your way; eventually proves to be a
planet of irrevocable purity; beautifully cleansing
every pore of your devastated countenance; with the
profuse yearning to forever surge forward in life,
Every lecherously abominable hatred that you
encountered in your way; eventually proves to be a
fountain of pricelessly unconquerable love;
unbelievably caressing each invidiously corrupt
element of your soul; with the sparkling goodness of
creation,
And every vindictively sullen corpse of death that you
encountered in your way; eventually proves to be a
divine sky of existence; making you immortally stand
up to the devil; and gloriously spawn once again; into
a tale of mystically undefeated life…..
2 Comments
Nikhil ji & Seema
Yes, This is a very nice write, no doubt, Very meaningful & intense.
However I am taking liberty for expressing my feelings on this & such poem(s) of Shri Nikhil Parikh, in frankness & without meaning any harm.
In my opinion for a poem it is too long and made complicated by use of so many adjectives at every possible place(unnecessary in my opinion) which diverts the reader from freedom of thought from his own free interpretation of the poem and enjoying the essence of it, to boredom & bondage. It is also making the poem difficult & too long.
This I am speaking from my feelings, personal observations and analysis
As a first step, if you try just removing these superfluous, complicated adjectives, respecting the intelligence of the reader to interpret the poem, I find, it makes the same poem simple & beautiful, without sacrificing the meaning.
As a lay reader, not any knowledgeable person, more so in English Poetry, I thought of making these observations at the risk of sounding foolish, for whatever they are worth and hope to be excused if my observations are found to be absurd.
For those interested in education in learning higher English and for being adept at Vocabulary in English, the poems of Shri Nikhil Parikh are exemplary & masterpieces, I have no doubt.
We at p4poetry would like to read some short poems from Mr. Nikhil Parikh and of different styles, for which members have made requests in comments, but the request has remained unfulfilled. Also we would cherish & like Mr. Nikhil to read and comment on the poems of other authors of p4poetry too, a wish that has also remained unfulfilled, although not mandatory.
Nikhil Parekh, 32 years of age, from Ahmedabad, India is a Love Poet and Six-Time World Record Holder for his Poetry with the Limca Book of Records (Only 2nd in Official World Rankings to the Guinness Book of World Records) . He is an author of Poetry Books which include - 1 God , Love versus Terrorism, You die; I die- Love Poems , Life=Death, If you cut a tree; you cut your own mother, The Power of Black, Hide and Seek, Longest Poem written by Parekh - Only as Life, The Womb. These comprise of over 7000 pages of his Poetry in totality .Parekhs Collected Poems have been awarded FEATURED at Scribd (The Worlds largest document sharing website) and his Poetry books have made it into the HOTLIST here - having had over hundreds of thousands of downloads and viewers . His Poetry has had the support and Patronization of several World Leaders which include U.S. President and Nobel Peace Prize Winner Barack Obama & the Queen of England . Parekhs complete poems, poetry books, awards and works can be browsed at : www.nikhilparekh.org or www.nikhilparekh.com
A beautiful poem that very well addresses the ups and downs of life and the intertwining relationship between them… Each stanza conveys immense depth and a strong message….Very well written
Highly recommend every one to patiently go through it!
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