May Be True!
Written by Hamid Siddharthi at
January 13, 2009 (7:28 pm)
(2 votes, average: 4.50 out of 5, rated)
Loading ...The crescent in dark night
Reminds me of eye brow shining bright
People looked for Eid moon in the sky
In her lightning face found the same I
O deer! How you dare show
Your eye to my dear?
Your borrowed beauty stands nowhere
Once with eyes of hers you compare
I am a practicing Muslim. I believe in religion. Therefore, I want to do something for the humanity. I think 'poetry' to be one of the best means to convey one's message to others and thereby make them sharing their ideas and points of views to them.
May be true…3 times……3 times, it is great….
nice and short, I liked it….what else……EID ka Chandm teri ankhon mein….
Stars = 5…..Somehow I thought 5 as you are rhyming is great and simplicity is adorable.
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