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A drop of water

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Anthology 2013 Entries, Crowned Poem, English Poetry

I am a little drop of water

Together, we form an ocean,

I roll down your cheek

And I am your emotion.

 

At the edge of the leaf

I love to just hang out,

But I do gush as froth

From the fountain spout.

 

 

The clouds just held me

Close, in their loving arms

Till I felt like meeting you

And I fell in your farms.

 

Lakes, rivers, sea or ocean

Call me by any name,

A little drop of water

Will always remain the same.

49 Comments

  1. seema says:

    Viju,
    What fantastic perception and and powerful expression. A perfect “jugalbandi” of simplicity and depth.I loved your earlier poem too…. you are an amazing poet.

  2. viju says:

    Thx. Seema,

    this poem i wrote last monsoon while i was driving & the lovely rain drops were falling on the windscreen. The thought just flased my mind, forming a few lines.

    sometimes, poetry is magic. & simplicity is something i love.

    thx. for ur kind words, tho’ i am just an engineer :)

    viju

  3. VishVnand says:

    I entirely agree with Seema ji’s fitting comment about this poem.
    “What fantastic perception and powerful expression. A perfect “jugalbandi” of simplicity and depth.”
    I should say that an amazing poet within you has “engineered” this beautiful poetry. Engineers are mostly a very versatile lot. You know why I say this :-)

  4. ULHAS says:

    Great poem…..just one change if you can — the word hang out is really out of this poetic world…change it

    I love to just hang out……..may be….I love to just remain out……….or something likne that….

    what do you think….

    Stars = 5

    • viju says:

      Dear Ulhas,

      Thx. dear 4 ur kind comments,

      @ hang out, letme fill u up on the use of these words & the reason thereoff.

      If u have observed the rain drop, right at the tip of the leaf, just before it falls off, 2 me thats a gr8 sight :)
      here i also used hang out, wid teh above intent as also like we humans hang out , 2 freak out ocasionally, giving a human touch , since the drop of water is narrating this poem, not me :) :)

      thx. a lot for ur keen observation & valuable suggestion.

      viju

  5. purabi says:

    the poetry really a good one.Romanticism breeding Wordsworth revered.
    seems like an engineer community developing here!good for the rest of us,will get to understand your facts& figures through your poetic ventures.

    nevertheless,the poetry is appreciated.

    • viju says:

      Thx. Purbi 4 ur kind comments & LOLLLL @ engineer community developing, i thot t’was the other way around, this community having developed the world ..hahah

      viju

  6. sneha says:

    dats again one of fine pieces of ur store…. poem wid a feel ….depth …n also a visual effect !! alll in all ….palpable …if i may say !!…n d word hang out is perfect …it agn gvs a visual impression…. !! lol ….cheers …
    cant tell u … hw happy i m reading ur poems over here !!

    • viju says:

      Dear Sneha,

      the purpose of my writing these poems is served – by ur last line – how happy i m reading ur poems over here -

      thx. is all i can say 4 ur comments & surely motivates me further :)

      yes i’d agree wid u @ hang out & the reason 4 using this , i have explained above @ comments – Ulhas.

      LOL & cheers

      viju

      • sneha says:

        @viju,
        yeah lol ….. gud reply… n i can see u seeing dat drop of water hanging out….n sure dats a lovely sight !!!
        n also u hanging out … lol

        • vijay says:

          @sneha,
          hahaha @ me hanging out, holding 2 de edge of a leaf like a rain drop :):)

          rain, with nothing really to do is a gr8 tym

          viju

  7. sneha says:

    dats again one of fine pieces of ur store…. poem wid a feel ….depth …n also a visual effect !! alll in all ….palpable …if i may say !!…n d word hang out is perfect …it agn gvs a visual impression…. !! lol ….cheers …
    cant tell u … hw happy i m reading ur poems over here !!

  8. shalu says:

    A brillant poem coming from an Engineer :)

  9. Busybee says:

    :-)) beautiful, short n simple !!

  10. seema says:

    No visit to this site in complete without at another peak at this beautiful work of art….

  11. medhini says:

    Simple and beautiful.

  12. purabi says:

    oh what a poetry!
    pleasure going through…

    thank you for sharing!

  13. vijay says:

    My pleasure Purabi, its my all time fav.
    Really enjoyed writing it when i did n d reason was d first drop of rain that fell on my cars windscreen as i was driving. glad u liked it.

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