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UPGRADING MY SOUL
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I am busy upgrading my soul…
With every day’s new updates,
Downloading good thoughts,
Saving in my memory…
And then uploading it for others…
Scanning my brains for viruses,
And cleaning up my drives for more space,
For something good which can change my life,
My mind and my taste,
And deleting malicious ones and waste,
But sometimes while surfing…
Some viruses attack me…
I get hanged up…
But…not too long…
I again restart with New energy and hopes,
Rescan my brains and more…
I am busy upgrading my soul,
Some files of my life are,
Hidden forever,
Some permanently deleted,
Some good ones show up on desktop,
And while using some got corrupted,
Some never supported me in my life,
And on some i regret for using cheats…
While surfing in my life…
I found many good programs,
Those trustworthy and true,
And those helped me in my life and thru,
Some of them i could never delete,
Coz those are ones, if lost will never again meet,
So keep mailing me my frnd…
You are amongst those good ones…
I am still busy upgrading my soul…
in a search of better,
And much more better…
I know 1 fine day my life wil be over…
And i may shut down forever…
And wil be of no use,
Hey but wait a second…
Then will be recycled and re transformed
And may reborn again with new hardwares,
And possibly better softwares..
But though the search will never end my friend,
It will go on and on…
And i will be still busy upgrading my soul…
20 Comments
very well conceived and what a beautiful comparison…indeed the similarity of the lifecycle with the automated world…beautifully depicted … Keep it up. Congrats.
Hiral, this is indeed a very commendable idea & effort from you to make such a nice, lovely, meaningful & philosophical poem using very effectively the words of computer technology in the effort to “upgrading of the soul”, which is of paramount importance for everyone to improve life & living in the present times; and where computer has to play a very important role.
Full marks to you for this unique posting. I read the poem many times.
By the way, what does one do, if the changes to implement & the upgrading load becomes too much and one gets out of sync. is one not required to then operate/press the “reset” button often. You have some how not used this button in the poem, which I have to quite often use on my computer. 
Great!excellent imagination,as vishvnand sir said-very unique!
(+)-the interpretation is authentic,almost funny
(-)-a bit predictable while half way through.
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Scanning my brains for viruses,
And cleaning up my drives for more space,
For something good which can change my life,
My mind and my taste,
And deleting malicious ones and waste,
i really loved the way u write
a gud write
style rhyming
and imagination
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hiral Reply:
January 2nd, 2009 at 8:10 pm
thnk u……..dude………
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