In Frustration…!(A Hindi Song)
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Loading ...This simple Hindi poem, composed as a situational Love Song, is a re-posting of my earlier poem, “Premi Ki Vyathaa” but now with its podcast, song rendered with accompaniment on harmonium.
This is in consequence to and with very thankful acknowledgment of the introduction of simplified podcasting, so nicely & skillfully introduced & explained by Shri Vikash/p4poetry, to whom all credit is due from p4poetry members for this such a valuable input.
An upset & dejected lover is lonely, sitting on a sea-shore watching waves coming & going, caressing the rocks, which but remain unmoved/unaffected; and reflecting on his own situation……!
प्रेमी की व्यथा….!
लहरें आती है रूम झूम,
चट्टानों से प्यार जताने,
चट्टाने तो अटल खडी,
ना माने लहरों की बातें .
कैसे मानूँ मै तुम म्रदु हो,
जब तेरा दिल है पत्थर,
चट्टानों से बढ़कर,
चट्टाने तो थोड़ी घिस घिस जाती हैं,
तुझ पर तो कुछ असर नहीं होता…….!
थक गया हूँ अब प्यार में तेरे,
कभी तो करते याद मेरी,
दिन पर दिन यूं बीत गए,
कभी प्यार से तुमने बुलाया नहीं,
मुझे प्यार से कभी पुकारा नहीं……!
जाने कैसी ये महफिल है तेरी,
जिसमे दिल की कदर कुछ नहीं,
जैसे भंवरे कई हैं चमन में,
कली को न परख है किसीकी,
प्यार मेरा पहचानोगी,
ये आशा है बेकार मेरी,
दिन पर दिन यूं बीत गए,
कभी प्यार से तुमने बुलाया नहीं,
मुझे प्यार से कभी पुकारा नहीं……….!
थक गया हूँ अब प्यार में तेरे,
कभी तो करते याद मेरी,
दिन पर दिन यूं बीत गए,
कभी प्यार से तुमने बुलाया नहीं,
मुझे प्यार से कभी पुकारा नहीं……!
“VishVnand”
10 Comments
Gr8 Sir
very nice and an amazing song
regards
rajdeep
VishVnand Reply:
November 8th, 2008 at 8:11 pm
Thank you so very much, rajdeep.
अरे वाह विश्वनन्द जी, बहुत खूब। आपने हमारी विनती स्वीकार करी और गा कर अपनी रचना सुनाई बहुत आनन्द आया। बहुत शुक्रिया। अपने बडे से परिवार में मैं इत्नी व्यस्त रहती हुं कि बहुत कम ही वक्त निकाल पाती हुं और कई दिन तो बिलकुल खोल ही नहीं पाती, पर यह ना पड-सुन पाती तो बहुत अफ्सोस होता।
VishVnand Reply:
November 5th, 2008 at 4:43 pm
परमिंदर जी, आपकी इन भावनाओं और प्रशंसा के लिए मैं अपने को बहुत भाग्यवान समझता हूँ, और आपका दिल से शुक्रिया अदा करता हूँ.
आपकी कविताओं का, उनके विषय और उनमे दर्शाए सुंदर भावनाओं और विचारों का मैं बड़ा ही शौकीन हूँ.
I liked to read your poem/song.
But I couldn’t hear it through
your voice as I don’t know the
technical part of it. I feel,
I won’t be able to learn.
VishVnand Reply:
November 8th, 2008 at 7:59 pm
Medhini ji, thank you for your comment.
I think for the sheer pleasure of it, to listen to others and also to render/present you own poems, I think this podcasting facility at p4poetry is a boon & a bliss, which you should not forgo. Don’t presume it is difficult. Shri Vikash has written very effective tutorials at our site. Please read them and you along with your computer adviser, to whom you will show the tutorials, can set up this arrangement for you on your computer easily. It is not difficult at all to set up & use this facility once it is set up on your computer. I will be anxiously awaiting your advise of having set up this arrangement & operating it. Regards
Retired senior engineering, marketing & operations management Executive with Passion for & deeply interested in reading & listening to all varieties of poetry & songs and in particular those rendered in Hindi/Hindustani. Also interested in & love reciting & rendering my own poems/compositions & songs on various subjects, composing tunes for songs and singing. Love to & adept at playing Harmonium as accompaniment to singing & also as accompaniment to others performing.
.......Location: Pune & Mumbai
Nice poem and nice composition also . I liked it as I really like and appreciate your poems and compositions .
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VishVnand Reply:
November 8th, 2008 at 8:10 pm
Thank you so very much.
An appreciative comment on my rendering of the poem, from your goodself, who in his own right is an admired music composer of some caliber & standing, is indeed very heartening & valuable to me. I must admit that you have made me feel very happy & enthused about my rendering. Regards
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