This moment

This moment I thought

I’d write a line or two,

but my brain box is not working

and I don’t know what to do.

My mind seems blank and  I have

run out of words,

I have run out of thoughts,

I have run out of everything.

This moment I want to say something

But I cannot seem to open my mouth

the words don’t come easy and

I just don’t know what to do.

This moment I hear the phone ringing

And I want to say Hello,

but I cannot seem to reach the phone,

for everything seems so far away

in-spite of  it being so near.

I wake up from this funny dream

at this Moment , I am happy

to be writng what I am doing.

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Comments

There are some grammatical errors and you seem to have posted in a hurry so there are typo mistakes as well.Please edit the poem

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I agree with renu ma’am,but the thoughts have been portrayed well.

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the poem is cool.

the hell with the semantics!

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You have started the poem with 4 great lines, but the rest of the poem runs fast…..but it doesnt get lost to a large extent….

The lines below show that you are caught in the dream and you want to get out of it…

This moment I hear the phone ring
I want to say Hello,
but I cannot seem reach the phone,
everything seems so far away

Stars = * * * *

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Thank you Renu, yes I did amend the typo and grammatical errors.

Ulhas hurry you said yeah…..becaue I am in hury to tell you what I was doing at this Moment. :)

Thank you Shreyansh and Manoj, and thank you all for your comments!

Keep them coming!

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