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Comeback once !!
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Loading ...Comeback to me,
just be back,
with whatever you like:
a smile,
let it be fake;
a burst of anger,
words caustic and with fire;
a look of derision,
ridiculing all my shameless celebration;
a stranger’s glance,
making me feel like a mere acquaintance;
a laughter with contempt,
for being cold when i heard you crying.
Let me break into pieces;
but, just be back once.
as a friend, foe or an acquaintance;
with whatever: likes or dislikes;
please be back once; Just once !!!
5 Comments
Very nice & sweet poem, liked it immensely.
Coming back is delayed. With so many alternatives suggested, very difficult to decide, which one to choose.
@ ULHAS , renu rakheja , Shreyansh Sen Sharma – Thank You !
@VishVnand : You have scared me now with this analysis, really !!!
Anyways, i am glad you liked.
A techie by profession,
and write out of compulsion,
for the killing need of expression,
when something just can't be told over a phone.
I wish i see the light and happily explain,
but still there is a lot of pain, lot of burden !
A comeback…..put perfectly….
Good…Stars = * * * *
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