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The last word can never be said !!!
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Loading ...I am not a mere reflection
of someone’s love, hate or indifferent emotion
for i m the ocean that reflects everything!!!
I am not a mere reflection
of my own little dream,even if it’s the sweetest one i have seen
for the tide of joys fade away as the full moon night passes on!!!
I am not a mere reflection
of my own broken dreams and all the pains
for i just need to sleep well and another dream’ll be just queing!!!
I am not a mere reflection
of your presence that causes a smile for no apparent reason
for the lightning lasts just a moment and cant be snapped even!!!
I am not a mere reflection
of everything i m tyring to say even
for the attempt to say the last word is the biggest illusion!!!
And still we keep fooling ourselves again and again.
May be that’s why you cant be in love and be a wise (wo)man!!!
A techie by profession,
and write out of compulsion,
for the killing need of expression,
when something just can't be told over a phone.
I wish i see the light and happily explain,
but still there is a lot of pain, lot of burden !
The poem was beautiful but i think the last 2 lines abruptly stopped the tempo and rythm…..your poem conveyed the thoughts that you tried to sum up in the last 2 lines so it wasnt needed,according to me. But its your poem- so be it !
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