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Its amazing…
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Its amazing how things worry,
leaves one perturbed and sorry.
Its amazing how time consoles,
as you move on filling up holes.
Its amazing how some people touch,
simply without even uttering much.
Its amazing how some inspire so well,
as in their own tips they walk and dwell.
Its amazing how some people are so nice,
smooth and lingering like scotch on ice.
Its amazing how some set such an example,
that you remember them as a good sample.
Its amazing how some impress with their unique character,
like a fine classic movie from a brilliant director.
Its amazing how some scare without saying a thing,
by an aura that’s mystical and spell binding.
And there are the rest who just don’t exist,
and some who’d never be in my list.
For only those matter who can evoke your feeling,
could be nobody, somebody, dead or living.
I am not what I say but what you perceive...
I am not what I give but what you receive.//
I am just a normal young fellow,
I am my true self when I am mellow.///
Revealing my self in my thoughts,
telling my state in varied words.//
At the end of the day I am here to fade away,
it's just a matter of time before I sway.///
To be dead and gone,
into oblivion all alone.//
Would leave behind these roads,
traces of me in the form of words.///
A very nice poem indeed.
In my opinion with the flow of the poem even the last stanza could have started with ” Its amazing how there are the rest….etc”. because for a writer engulfed in beautiful awe within, which the poem seems to reveal, everything does appear amazing and that itself is a beautiful feeling. The non amazing part does not exist at all.
I don’t know if I have conveyed what I have felt.
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