Comments on: Locked Red Door, A monument…!.

By: neeraj guru

neeraj guru — Sat, 23 Aug 2008 19:22:47 +0000

सही अर्थों में यह कविता नहीं है,क्योंकि यह पद्य ज़्यादा लगाती है अन्तिम पंक्तियों को छोड़कर, पर भाव सुंदर हैं और यही भाव एक कविता को जन्म देते हैं और ऐसा ही इस कविता में भी हुआ है.बंद दरवाज़े के एक तरफ़ शासन-प्रशासन है और दूसरी तरफ़ आम-निरीह जनता है और कमाल यह है की फिर भी देश चल रहा है.

By: renu rakheja

renu rakheja — Tue, 19 Aug 2008 08:58:08 +0000

Thought provoking and another unique interpretation to the contest picture

By: U L H A S

U L H A S — Mon, 18 Aug 2008 12:11:36 +0000

Vishvanandji, you have put together a beautiful set of english lines, but while reading these lines they feel to be lost, though at the very end they all of a sudden bring sense to the poem, like surprise surprise.

The Imagination put in this poem is very good and it is as better as it can get.I suppose the Independence day has made you think towards this poem and has brought out the daring idea. Your sense of patriotism reflected totally here.The poem is good and deserves * * * *

By: U L H A S

U L H A S — Mon, 18 Aug 2008 12:10:21 +0000

I am not able to put a comment

By: medhini

medhini — Mon, 18 Aug 2008 10:20:03 +0000

beautifully written with great imagination and skill.