A pretty damsel
. There, flows the river Ganges,
Stretching, thousands of miles;
Around the wide river beds,
There are vast fields;
Grains are grown in plenty,
Fruits too are grown in plenty.
A little far from the fields,
You can see a hut, near the trees;
A very small hut, hardly,
A few can stay there happily;
Look there; a small beautiful girl,
Sits around the fire, a pretty damsel.
Turns around, seems to wait for someone,
There came, an old man with none;
The girl spread two long mats,
They sat over those jute mats,
She took out some potatoes, from fire
They ate and soon the potatoes got over.
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In my view,
a pretty poem, but
needs some more make up material,
to appear enchanting.
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