HELL’S DOOR

Written by sandip pol
August 17, 2008

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Nobody wants to Die, But always wants to enter in Heaven instead of Hell.

Life is beautiful but you yourself make it difficult. As Human being God creates worlds best thing, But we use it in wrong way. Some people waisting their life doing so much crime on this earth.They forgot after death they have to face God. And his justice sends you worst world  i.e. HELL. There are so many options created depending on our crime. So who wants to enter HELL’S DOOR……………………..!??????????????

Lots of closed door to the HELL,

Who’s  turn now its ringing the BELL,

Depending on your Crime,

There are different PUNISHMENT,

Its a very bad Time,

Because God gives JUDGEMENT,

You are not a Trapper,

This time you have to Suffer,

God going to cut your Hand,

You raped an innocent girl; now bring a Band,

You cheat a girlfriend using lots of NAME,

So you have to hug hot statue made up of iron  in this GAME,

You make a fraud with your wife,

In a small cage without sunlight you have to spend rest of Life,

You killed so many PEOPLE,

You have been stabbed by knife from that PEOPLE,

Boiling water is waiting for your job,

You are the person who fix a Bomb…………………

If you don’t want to go in HELL, then do the nice work.

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Comment by U L H A S on 18 August, 2008 @ 6:34 am

Sandeep, you are strength is writting in marathi or Hindi, you have to do that, if you conver this to marathi or Hindi and fine-polish it, it may look beautiful..not just beautiful, it would be a superb poem…..

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Comment by parminder soni on 3 September, 2008 @ 6:28 pm

The idea is great but needs polishing.

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