The Bride 2 (for weekly poetry prompt)


Knoted a bridal red

stringed to one, by a thread

and Kissed to one bread

and kissed to one joy and tears that be shed

in midst the fire which flames a journey

wore, the ring and wore my honey

pledged to his life, to make it sunny

let it begin, and joy may it bring in

life is long and life is mean

Would we keep as it is now, as much as clean

Let it begin, as it has now, let it be seen………

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Comments

Tried your hand at verse forming….though very pedantic. Thats how we all start.

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Poonam, welcome to p4poetry & your post.
Why not work on this poem a bit more,
to polish it further and repost.
The content is very good.

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