Is this love or lust?


As we two sat on the beach cuddled together,

starring at the night skies,

with moon shinning on us,

our love deepened.

Deeply occupied in sexual notions,

our body temperature began to rise,

our bodies began to quiver,

his lips touch my body all over

and we were lost in love,

the sea water rose to touch us,

it felt that the sea was filled with ecstasy

that, the moon shied away and hid behind the clouds,

and the stars dancing on the two lovers -

so passionaley lost in loved lay sprawled on the beach.

Why did he say he loved me?

Why did he kiss me so fiercely?

And why did he make love to me?

Why did he life to me?

Now I sit in alone in  love or lust

feeling his fingers all over my body,

It would remain  as a mark forever

The memory of a sweet satisfaction that we had.

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“Why” written as whey. I know its a typo.So please edit….
Its intense but could have been better… I quite like it…

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Reposted again kindly leave your comments please.

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Just look at the 16th line-Whey instead of why…
That’s what I meant…Please edit…
Its good…

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Bejewelled Prose!

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मत करो कोई वादा जो तुम निभा न सको
मत चाहो उसे जिसे तुम कभी पा न सको
प्यार कहाँ ज़िन्दगी में किसी का पूरा होता है
इसका तो पहला अक्षर ही अधूरा होता है

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