A Tribute to p4poetry…
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My bum’s gone numb reading all that’s written today,
senseless and dozed out hands,lifeless like a clay.
My sight’s gone dim, weary and watery,
an addiction, learn to wrap up a bit early.
Some write about the key,
some about just let it be.
Some write about dreams wrapped up in coffeehouse,
some about life just like a game of cat and a mouse.
Some write about their newborn daughter,
the feelings they go through and their pleasure.
Some write about a dying soldier calling his mother,
drenched in melancholy about their faraway lover.
Some touch your heart in a way you can relate,
some pour out the ongoing state of our state.
Some let out their innermost secrets uninhibited,
some hide, pride and some just stay grounded.
Its a platform where feelings are shared in a different manner,
some are judged,weighed,commented and declared a winner.
But its more than what it really appears and comes across,
where fine poetry counts more than a beautiful prose.
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Krishna,,,,one more thing, I am going to post a few today, one of them would a contest poem….I am keeping my fingers crossed…..
Boss life is not giving me time to write, so I envy you…
Again a beautiful piece…..Kya Item hein boss….apki poetry…I am a fan of your poetry…….
hey!this is what I call “refreshing”.And thanks a ton for including something from my work(dreams:the coffeehouse effect)…I feel honoured!
Good work,Krishna. WIll post something similar that I wrote which I also read out in the poetry meet last week 
…Thank you Ulhasji for your support.
…Shreyansh I am happy that you liked the poem.You are welcome anyways. You ….are good,very very good and look forward to your next post.
…Waiting for your post Ms.Rakheja then.Thank you for the appreciation.
….Thank you Ms. Datar . That goes without saying…
@krishna.yaar,I have four poems in the pipeline…You can see them in the drafts.Will post them after editing..!
I am not what I say but what you perceive...
I am not what I give but what you receive.//
I am just a normal young fellow,
I am my true self when I am mellow.///
Revealing my self in my thoughts,
telling my state in varied words.//
At the end of the day I am here to fade away,
it's just a matter of time before I sway.///
To be dead and gone,
into oblivion all alone.//
Would leave behind these roads,
traces of me in the form of words.///
boss really really very very good,,,,,
This is as best it can get…..playing great with any topic that is given….
Boss dont you work or study…..:)))
Do something apart from poetry…..
Stars added….5 stars added…..You know I dont give 5 stars simply….
Again a very good poem……
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