Behind the Locked door - Entry to the Aug Contest
Written by shalu
August 7, 2008
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Loading ...Behind the locked door was once
a house that had seen the sunshine
of many different years.
a house that had seen some happiness
a house that had seen tears.
This lovely house now seems so empty
Since you left with last goodbyes.
The smiles and talk, the happy laughs
Echo above the lonely sighs
Whether leaves are green in springtime
snow leaves lightly on the ground
This old house will hold the memories behind the locked door.
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Comments
yes this is very nice poem indeed,now a humble rquest to you that please you post one a poem per day it is easy for us to evaluate to you.
I am a working mother of three children. A son and two daughters all of 16, 11 & 4 years of ages.
I am originally from Mumbai but based in the Gulf for over two decades, presently in Dubai - United Arab Emirates.
I had wish to be a journalist, but that wish remained unfullfilled.
I love to read, write and listen to music besides cooking and gardeing.Oops here I go hope I did not bore you.
so here I write what come straight from the heart and with experience of what I see around the world I live.
You will see many changes from time to time. hopefully, all constructive 
nice a subtle poem…try to add some more paras to it.
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