Life in a moment !!!
Paused are the breaths ,beats get slower;
gone are the purposes,lost are the desires, or it does not bother,
but I am more alive than ever.
Time stands still or the moment lasts for ever;
i dont know any fear ,any tear or it does not matter,
and i am more alive than ever.
Traffic moves slower,posts cross me one after another;
i dont reach anywhere,or didnt i start ever or i dont care,
but I am more alive than ever.
I lose my sight , i dont want to hear;
my mind goes blank , i dont want to think any more or i dont bother,
but I am more alive than ever.
I don’t laugh, i don’t cry either;
am i so near yet so far or it does not matter,
but I am more alive than ever.
I don’t feel any pain,i don’t feel any joy either;
am i in a trance or dead or i do not care,
but i am more alive than ever.


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That’s when you’re truly in the moment!
I like how the poem sounds when I read it aloud. This is something that I’d write!
Keep writing!
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