BLUESY HUE

This poem was written for a weekly contest in an orkut community..

the topic for the week was blue..

would love to hear comments about it..

BLUESY HUE

Just a color, to begin with – Blue,
Now it is all that the heart remembers,
The lone shade when my rainbow renders,
It ended soon before it begin with – You.

Never knew what colors could do,
Back in the days of my restless youth,
Till, that evening when I saw the truth,
What deep still blue eyes could show to you.

No, I never recovered from the bluesy hue
You and I were deep friends even then,
But it never really had begun, till then,
And it all ended before I could discover you.

That night, time stilled, to show us forever,
Your innocuous eyes, hinted a want,
With a glint of blue as the sun went slant,
Only that fleeting moment, came again never.

Stars where dots and we where the joining pins,
Then when the day had unfurled,
I recall I had lost you to the world,
I still wander near those shores forty years since.

I don’t remember now, much of me or you
I am searching to feel again, feel my bluesy hue.

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Comments

Beautiful poem.
Liked the content & manner of presentation in the poem.
Welcome to p4poetry

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Welcome brother…
Good one…
Keep writing…

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