Camel Vs. Life Coach
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Loading ...I wrote this poem way back the present day, probably 1 year. So, comment and tell how is it for someone who discovered this passion.
One tells what to do,
The other himself does it.
One pronounce to rescue,
The other falls into pit.
One inspires on an armchair,
The other on the sand.
One gets in the air,
The other keeps on land.
One naps in cool air,
The other under copper sky.
One tells not to bend,
The other does it, O my!
One bows for many times,
The other bows for none.
One lives with delicacies,
The other with sole one.
One eats incredible dishes,
The other lives on thorns.
One gets all the respect,
The other feared by wild horns.
Even then is the ship,
Behind the Life Coach.
Though he tells in theory,
And other has practical approach!
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A fairly good poem with good original thoughts.
I feel, some one who is really good at English Poetry can probably help you in correcting/editing this poem towards further refinement & impact,to become an excellent poem.
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