Breathe-Free, My Nation
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I can’t just lie, to see you die!
I can’t just laugh to see you cry!
I can’t forget the love you bestowed,
I can’t place your head, my mother, on a sword.
I can’t see you covered with corruption!
My fault is making you face conviction.
I will try to quench your thirst of progress,
Take you to the stars and clear all the mess.
You deserve to be beautiful than ever,
I can’t scratch you, Oh my saviour!
My heart cries to see so many contusions,
I will make you greener without any illusion.
You stand in the needy hour,
Amid a hurricane, you need some power.
If I go away too, it won’t be right.
I can’t leave you alone in this darkest night.
I too, like others tried to elope,
To go in heaven and place you to cope,
This unendurable hell, my mother,
We will kill the evils forever, together.
By- Vijesh Bhute
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Comments
A very beautiful poem indeed.
The potency of noble thoughts about Motherland and manner of their placement in verses is, in my opinion, outstanding..!
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Even if 30% of the population we have share your feeling,I am sure we will get to see the change by tomorrow. Good work and very well written…
क्या खाता है दोस्त ? हिला के रख दिया अपुन को MIND blowin stuff…though a bit of a rhyme scheme wud have made it our new NATIONAL ANTHEM…. jking 
@ shreyansh, neeraj sir, vishvnand sir, krishna sir, medhini mam and mayank, thank you all for your comments.
i am a young innovative poet with lot of thougths intruding my mind and with a clear ambition in my mind.i love to use my pen rather than my mouth.i have been encouraged by a few prizes at the college level and i am yet to meet the world outside. I am enjoying the new life at iitk where acknowledgement does pour from the sky. i hope i continue my hobby and take it to a new level..
You will see many changes from time to time. hopefully, all constructive 
I liked the attitude underlining this poem.nice way to show your concern about the nation.patriotic and moving.
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