संगीत का आगमन…….!

जीवन की सरगम ऐसी ही होती है. मैं झंकृत हो उठा. सरगम पर किया गया प्रयोग अच्छा है.कविता में यही प्रयोगधर्मिता है.

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a very nice poem, liked reading it very much..

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वाह!!!!!!!! सरगम का ऐसा प्रयोग देख दिल खुश हो गया.
इसमें जीवन कि सच्चाई बड़े सुर से पिरोया है आपने.

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अनोखा!मैंने शास्त्रीय संगीत ११ साल सीखी है,उन सरगम के साथ खेलने में जो कुओं मिलता है,वह अतुल्य है|
बहुत सुंदर|

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Lovely ! Its close to an ‘ Acrostic ‘

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Thank you, Neeraj ji, Vijesh, spmisra,Shreyansh for all your comments.
Renu ji, I had so far not known this word & looked up for it in the directory after seeing your comment. Thank you so much for this.
The idea for the poem just emerged while penning down the feelings on the subject. I knew not what this form could be called.
Is the title for poem right or some other title would be better?

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You are welcome,Vishvnandji. Acrostic also figures in the “Forms of English Poetry” that I had posted in the forum.

maybe जीवन की सरगम would be better as a title

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