My sugarcoated feelings
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I’d never thought I would be
So lucky, I’m with you…
You bring the best out of me;
My days are brighter with you.
When I was down with pain,
My days were all insane…
You came and held my shoulders
And I was back up again.
Now my wounds seem to be healing…
Here are my sugarcoated feelings.
I want to stare at your fingers
Forever, never bid adieu;
Come place your head on my shoulders
I’ll sing this song to you…
A delicate touch, so soothing…
A keen love,so pure;
You leave, I stand here brooding
It’s more than just a lure…
Not my heart, it’s whole of me you’re stealing…
These are my sugar coated feelings,
For you.
5 Comments
The closing 10 lines are lovely….could make a very nice lyric for backsteet boys kinda song 
But try not to force the rhymes (referring to beginning lines)
Keep writing!
Shreyansh,
” Not my heart, it’s whole of me you’re stealing…” – the best line.
It was pleasant to read this poem, sugar content just about right
Gion
Aah.will write something new soon.
awesome feelings yaar, written in a well manner. gud work..
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