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Dost: Gazal with aliteration Sarang Malichkar

Gazal

Aliteration (Anupras)

Dil diwana dostose danishta darkinar kyon na ho!                                   (d is repeated)

Saapo ki sohbat me sapera samzdaar kyon na ho!                                   (s is repeated)

Nuktachin nukhs hi nikalenge nashakhori ke ,                                  (N is repeated)

Mayse magar mijaj majedaar kyon na ho!                                           (M is repeated)

Jafaa me jajabat-e-jiya jalaaye jo jana,                                               (J is repeated)

Dhadakanoki dhadhak dhuwadaar kyon na ho!                                  (Dha is repeated)

Gul se hi gulshan gulzaar ho gar,                                                       (G is repeated)

Khu-e-khar khatarnak khunkhar kyon na ho!                                  (Kha is repeated)

Saaton samundar sahme sada sunkar meri,                                     (s is repeated)

Aawaz na aaye to aah asardaar kyon na ho!                                   (A is repeated)

Gar gujar gaye to galise gujarenge Gaahe gaahe,                               (G is repeated)

Deed ke diwane ko dilbar ke deedar kyon na ho!                            (D is repeated)

Dil diwana dostose danishta darkinar kyon na ho!                                   (d is repeated)

Saapo ki sohbat me sapera samzdaar kyon na ho!                                   (s is repeated)

( Nukhtachin -Critics samikshak, Khu-e-khar- kato ka mijaj, gaahe gahe- kabhi kabhi)
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This the best aliteration that i have read so far
until now i was knowing only
Khadak sing ke khadakne se khadakti hain khidkiyan,
chach ne chahi ko,
chanda chamke chamcha,(fana)

but this is the best

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sarang malichkar Reply:

SHUKRIYA

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बहुत अच्छे पर अगर आपने देवनग्री में पोस्ट किया होता तो पढने में चार चान्द लग जाते

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Really
How is it possible, just amazing.

Keep it up.

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sarang malichkar Reply:

BAHUT SHUKRIYA

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धन्यवाद रेनु,
अगलि बार मै जरुर प्रयास करुन्गा . फिलहाल मै तायपिन्ग कि प्रयास कर रहा हु.

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देवनागिरी में लिखते तो और अच्छा होता, पर ग़ज़ल में अक्षरों के साथ जो खेले हो वह बाकई शानदार है.

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good .keep it up.

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sarang malichkar Reply:

Thanks Jugal,I am realy late to respond.
Thank u very much

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I like the gazal. Your play the words is excellent,still you are briliantly pursueing such novel ideas.

Gul se hi gulshan gulzaar ho gar,
Khu-e-khar khatarnak khunkhar kyon na ho

very well said

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sarang malichkar Reply:

THANKS YAAR

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Good work.

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sarang malichkar Reply:

THANKS FOR YOUR REMARK

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i read ur both aliterations, both are mind blowing, but iski baat hi alag hai.

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sarang malichkar Reply:

THANK U VERY MUCH

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I liked it too much keep going

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sarang malichkar Reply:

Thank u Ajay

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Excellent word-play I am going to read your rest of poems right now.

Keep it up

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sarang malichkar Reply:

Thank u

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maza aa gaya

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Sarang Reply:

THANKS

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This even better than KATL. Keep it up

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zabardast

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sarang malichkar Reply:

@dharmishtha,
Thank

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बहुत खूबसूरत है इस कविता का अंदाज़ | क्षमा चाहती हूँ कि काफी वक्त से कुछ ख़ास पढ़ नहीं पा रही हूँ | शब्दों का अति सुन्दर प्रयोग है |

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sarang malichkar Reply:

thanks parminder

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