Drown In The Dream
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Loading ... A haunting melody
A lilting song
Invades my senses
Staying long
A whiff of your fragrance
Brought by the wind
Permeates my skin
Mingling within
Fleeting images forever
In the pond of my heart
Now I see your face
Staring at me stark
Are you for real
Or just a mirage?
Dreams dont come true
In life’s collage
Let me dip and drown
In my own dream
Where you and I
Will fly and stream
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The poem has managed to set that romantic mood …writing romantic poems is not easy at all…its surprising to see how effortlessly your poem flows.
p.s-the end could have been a bit more smooth.
Beautuful…
I loved-”fleeting images in the pond of my heart,now I see your face staring at me stark”
Renu, with due respect to your good poems and good skills, this Poem was pretty ordinary, the last 2 paras got lost I guess.
I guess you are testing people and there comments.
Again, views are individualistic. 1 star from my side.
I am water
Sometimes solid...you can always depend on
Sometimes liquid...fits in anywhere
Sometimes vapor...ephemeral...I am there and then I am gone
Sometimes ice...but can be dissolved by fire
Sometimes swirling ....with passion
Sometimes tranquil ....with still desire
Always flowing....unaware of the destination
Sometimes vivid ....like blue sapphire
Always pure....see your reflection
Always rising ...wanting to go higher
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congrats Renu ji, you gotta nice words, this is one of the very few english poetries i liked ever.
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