Clouds embrace


This poem is about a newly born bird that wishes to fly and show to the world his endeavor

 

Let me fly an inch higher

and make the clouds aware.

Tell them about a new flyer

who has a little more to dare.

 

A jaunt close to the gust

away from those dear.

So to tell you, thou mighty, my lust

a little out of my fear.

 

And so the clouds, I plunge thou sport

and I play not the games of pride;

no demonstrations to conquer,

and thy first kiss, for which is my first ride.

 

And let me dare the tall tree there, and let me alone fly

along with the mastered crow and mustered butterfly.

For they all wait to the occasion, and push me for a try,

to take that leisure, which they till day gleefully enjoy.

 

Though my wings are so young, and the skies are still in still torch,

and yet there is time to put

a known pleasure, to march.

and so for my tender wings, I have this very first urge,

oh take me brave to the skies at large.

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Comments

Nice poem.It flows well until the last line.
May I suggest….

and so for my tender wings,I have this very first urge
Take me high into the sky and let my flight surge

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He writes wonderful poems !!! thats not the concern here… however checjk the beauty of the exciting unstoppable approach to the poem which is keeping the reader glued till the poem finishes …. :)

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