If I were…..

Written by vijesh bhute
June 15, 2008

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If I were…..

 

If I were the Sun,

Would shower my rays on you,

To make you feel in a spotlight,

Let you look at me with your closed eyes.

 

If I were the moon,

Would stay behind you, all the nights,

To keep your shadow ahead of you,

Never let you turn behind, even in the darkest nights.

 

If I were the clouds,

Would make you wet at some times,

When your eyes drip instead of taps,

Never let you know, which tears are yours.

 

If I were the tree,

Would grow to coat the whole sky,

To place everyone with you in shade,

To let thunders crack me first, then you.

 

If I were me,

Would be the sun, the moon, the clouds and the tree,

Make you cry in laughter and laugh in cries,

Never let you alone in any turmoil.

 

                                                         By- Vijesh Bhute

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Comments
Comment by parikshit on 15 June, 2008 @ 9:38 am

very romantic!
lovely

Comment by VishVnand on 15 June, 2008 @ 9:59 am

A lovely poem, of ideas & praiseworthy imagination.

Comment by renu rakheja on 15 June, 2008 @ 11:26 am

Really nice….

Comment by Rahul Pathak on 15 June, 2008 @ 1:52 pm

Beautiful thoughts . Nice sweet poem .

Comment by Apoorv on 16 June, 2008 @ 9:47 am

simply written but as romantic as they come….. gr8 one dude

Comment by Shreyansh Sen Sharma on 16 June, 2008 @ 1:09 pm

kya baat hai…..beautifully crafted..never thought that you could write romantic poems too…take a bow.

Comment by Kaustubh on 27 June, 2008 @ 3:46 pm

Pretty nice n romantic. I guess poetry doesn’t need bigger word’s jus d feelings r enough. And anybody can feel ur soul. Quite a touchy one..
Jus do nt leave d wonderland n come up wid another 1 IF SHE WAS…..

Comment by Vinita Karsh on 8 July, 2008 @ 1:59 pm

Very beautiful poem,I have no words to say,
Carry on……….

Comment by Mayank on 13 July, 2008 @ 3:00 pm

dude have u got a galfrnd or been watchin too much of ROMANCE onscreen ?? Yaar aise idea churata kidar se haii…. BTW loved dis one for its pure LOVELY FEELING
;)

Comment by krishna on 16 July, 2008 @ 1:03 am

kamaal hai…
kaash yeh maine likha hota…
very nice…love it…

Comment by vijesh bhute on 17 July, 2008 @ 7:57 am

@ parikshit sir, vishvnand sir, renu mam, rahul sir, apoorv, shreyansh, kaustubh sir, vinita mam, mayank and krishna sir, thank you all for such gr8 comments.

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