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LOVE

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English Poetry

Whisper
Don’t Shout
Feelings of love are for you and me,
They aren’t to be said out loud.

Hold my hand
Don’t let go
There are feelings in my heart
Which I want you to know.

Kiss
Don’t Speak
Language of love
Is more than words deep.

Admire
Don’t get into the act
A certain restraint
Can keep the passion intact.

Close your eyes
Don’t break the magical spell
Let’s dream a dream together
We’ll create a history to tell.

Love
Don’t Shy
The intensity of love will cease to die.
Come with me and we’ll fly.

(13 April 2006)

15 Comments

  1. parikshit says:

    beautiful!

  2. krishna says:

    You sure have feelings trapped inside,
    take it out, beautiful it is, do please hide…

  3. poetravinder says:

    Simple, soothing, ripe and free
    This is how poetry should be

  4. preeti datar says:

    @parikshit – Thanks šŸ™‚

    @krishna – Yup, the feelings come out in poetry! šŸ˜€

    @poetravinder – Thanks for the kind words and the praise šŸ™‚

  5. VishVnand says:

    A very beautiful poem, of intense feelings & a unique lovely manner of putting these in words. Congrats x 3 !
    Please don’t thank me, for these comments are in spite of me.

  6. gosh…If you permit,can I compose a song with this poem as the lyrics?simple and sweet…

  7. preeti datar says:

    Thanks Vijayanad ji! – despite of you warning me against it šŸ™‚

    Shreyansh, ofcourse I’d love that! šŸ˜€ (PS – I’m waiting for you to upload the song. you can do it using p4poetry.com podcast facility šŸ˜€ )

  8. Shreyansh says:

    yeah fine…I will do that as soon as possible!

  9. you prefer which genre???which artist do you listen to,if any…

  10. preeti datar says:

    westlife, enrique, shania twain, kelly clarkson, john mayer…etc šŸ™‚

  11. Aryan says:

    a poem filled wid feelings n love….. as u’ve mentioned u like 2 hear westlife n enrique… wel dat reflects thr ur poetry… all of them r PREETi silent n lovely…

    I’ve seen ur recent poems, all dem r filled wid feelings…

  12. vinod says:

    Brilliant! Love the flow and the passion comes across so well!

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