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Intense Moments (25-30)

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English Poetry

Our fears

Incessant tears

The city is washed out

 

Your tears just flow

I tried to make them slow

Life becomes a big trial

 

The house seems empty

The unpainted wall waits to be coloured

By her laugher.

 

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Smsing you

Was easy, before the heartbreak.

 

Mom’s pillow – happy and dry

The teary gems – stolen

When dad left home.

 

When love’s over

She looks killing

The restraint breaks

6 Comments

  1. neeraj guru says:

    this is sign of your emotions,what I wants to say –
    एक दर्द है जो जीने नहीं देता,
    इन अश्कों को बहने नहीं देता.
    अपनी बाहें हरदम फैलाये रखना,
    लाख चाहें कोई जीने नहीं देता.

  2. krishna says:

    pretty intense…
    but whats life without intensity!!!!

  3. Vikash says:

    gr8 as usual. 🙂

  4. VishVnand says:

    I am stunned, to come across such new beautiful, simple but intense way of presentation to make the reader think & picturise the meaning.
    great indeed.

  5. renu rakheja says:

    Loved the 3rd one the most ….

  6. moni,, says:

    i read ur every instant moment,,,,,
    all r superb…..icluding this one,,,,
    carry on,,,,

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