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pankhuri-20
Written by sushil sarna at
May 30, 2008 (12:50 pm)
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Loading ...जाने को हम तुमसे बहुत दूर चले जायेंगे
बाद जाने के कभी लौट के ना आयेंगे
राज आंखों मैं नमी का गर पूछेंगे लोग
मुस्करा कर हम दर्द छुपा जायेंगे
सुशील सरना
3 Comments
Hi Sushil Ji, I am vinita. I am a fan of this type of poem.
Kaise kahu ki in 4 lines ne mere dil ko kitne andar tak chhua hai. aisa lag raha hai jaise ye lines aapne mere liye hi likhi hai. Again thanks.Agar aap mera ye msg dekhe to please ye bataye ki apki aur poems mai kaha se dekhu? aaj maine first time is website ko dekha,socha nahi tha ki pahle din hi itni impress ho jaungi.Please contant me on my email address, If yor can.
My full name is Sushil Sarna and date of birth is 2nd August,1951. I belong to Punjabi culture. I have cleared Graduation in 1970. I am serving in Central Goverment Service. My wife is my best critic and has has always encouraged me for writing the poems. This sence was developed during my college period. I was always praised for my poems by my friend circle. Later, in my family I was supported for this passion and also in my office. But clearly speaking I never tried to get my poems to be published any where. This site has given me a birth as poet though I still think that I dont know the poetry but after reading the comments, I feel that there are persons who recognise my poetry.
What should I writer more about myself. I am a very simple and nature loving person.A very sentimental person. Sometime I feel tears at the time of making some poetry.This brief introduction.Thanks.
I am a resident of Jaipur-the Pink City.
Short and sweet poem . Cheers .
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