Be Not A Photo; But A Frame
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Loading ...A picture may be changed,
But the frame remains same.
You must also design that,
And not just hang to change.
The frame should be hard enough,
To survive all the quakes.
And bear a simple colour,
With attractive makes.
Make it to be hung easily,
Complexions must not prevail.
Should steal attention it,
But not as noisy rail.
This will make you immortal,
Like one’s poem makes him.
You will design many lives,
Just by designing yours to brim.
3 Comments
Liked the poem very much for its content.
Such a refined thought & its portrayal
Further refinement..yes..will make the piece super.
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To be really honest, I don't think i am a poet. Rather I am just a child who has a hobby of writing poems. They de-stress me a lot. I don't really plan out and then write the poem. Unlike professionals, I can't write poem any time I want. I write a poem (only when i am in mood) in not more than 20-min., be it a good or a bad one. But I am very happy to know that India is never going to lag behind with presence of all skilled poets like you...........
Good theme. Nice comparision with photo and frame. But the rhymes seemed forced and the poem is not smooth.
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