Moving On
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Last week I walked
Along the same road
Where you and I’d talked
As down came the sword
Every stone was in place
Every flower in bloom
There was just no trace
Of my grief and gloom
You too have moved on
Without looking back
Only I stay forlorn
And alone in the dark…….
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Two edges of the road and two newly turned strangers.
distance can’t be measured in miles
loved reading it
short and simple but says a lot… it’s true how ppl can sometimes seem to be insensitive… but then as preeti said…. it might just be feigned normality
Aparna,
” As down came the sword ” – there is an edge of violence to the emotions.
The second verse is so real to me. Been there.
The title is made ironic by the third verse. There is a parallel world at work hear.
very touching poem,
Gion
Maybe the raod and him were feigning normality?
A poem which I so relate to…
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