Hey you
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Loading ...Hey you, ..yes….. u only
Can you hear me?
Do you care what I have to say?
Well, that’s okay if you don’t,
Listen anyway.
I don’t know if you noticed,
Me noticing you.
I think about you all the time,
And my heart skips when I do u.
You’re my every thing,
My only answered prayer,
Hey you……,
Can you tell?
Why my world revolves around you,
You’re the only reason,
And where I struggle to stay awake at night,
So I can pretend,
That my nightmares aren’t real.
Hey you,
Did you know?
That when you smile,
Some of the cold and warm air
pushes away from my heart,
And I make you a silent promise,
That I will never give up,
Even long after everyone else,
Hey you……,
Can you feel this way?
everything i do i think about you
i miss you so much to bad you cant see the inside of my heart
I wanted us to walk along the beach and watch the sunset
I Think I’m In Love With You
Hey you,
Can you do something?
Just sitting here, can’t get you off my mind
I don’t know what to do
I love you, I hate you
I don’t know which one I should choose
make a move, say something!
i can’t stand this waiting,
please say something:
say something fast!
Hey you….
Do u know?
i cant stand it for long
i m only a guy that holds out my heart for you to hold
hoping you keep it safe
and not let it break.
maybe its too late.
we can never be that way….
Hey you…
m i a fool?
i m hurtin inside
but you will never see
the hurt inside of me
maybe i m just a fool
i do anything for you.
is it not enough?
i take things slow.
but are you comfortable?
do you wanna move faster?
i m just a fool …..
i cant dive
or else ill die
i m just a fool…
that fell in love with you….
And I so badly want you here
You’ll always have a place in my heart
I’ll always keep my eye on everything you do
Just because i do really love you!
You are my everything
You are my light
Hey you,
I hope you can hear me,
I..have short of time…………..
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Comments
Dear Vishvnand Jee,
I respect your comment.But i think we can’t write a poem according our culture….
right i address her with Hey…..but can you feel the pain behind it
Poetry isn’t what you see or hear
It is what you feel
Poetry is digging
deep into inter feelings
bringing it out
and exposing it.
Poetry is a confession…
poetry is like making love
long and beutiful
Poetry is what you believe
What you are
Poem an experience i have
Poem can’t bound in a culture
As far as spelling/grammer mistakes is concerned…that i’ll take care
Thanks a lot for taking the time in reading my work.
Have a nice day
Free ki salah hamain bhaatii nahi
haar manni hamain aati nahi
parwah nahi kertey
chahe koi kitna gayey gaan
jo lagta hai bhala
kerta hai wohi kaam
Have A Nice Day
Cheers!
Main aapse haar gayaa hun,
aur ajab baat ye hai ki,
haar mein bhi, jeet ki,
Anubhooti aajama raha hun….
Have a nice day and a very cherished life.
haar jeet ki nahi hai koi baat
acchii rahi aap sey hamari yeh mulakaat
hum bhi yarron key yaar hai
kartay apne doston sey pyar hai
haar maan key bhi, jeet ki,
Anubhooti aajama raha ho….
yoon hi nahi aap hamare
dil ko bha rha ho…
take care
God bless you
Dear Me,
I have the following to suggest with due humility…
“Hey you” is, according to me, not the way an Indian poet will address the one who means so much to him. Think of a poetic way of addressing your beloved, then only this poem will mean what it wants to convey and. Also, please take care & carefully edit, to correct simple spelling/grammer mistakes which have cropped up in the poem…..Hope you will take these observations in the right spirit and would not feel offended. The content & feelings of the poem are quite nice.
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