My Inner Sun

Written by renu rakheja
May 22, 2008

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You flew in softly and tiptoed in my life
My parched soul got a reprieve
My heart is now your permanent home
We shall play with elves and gnomes

The moon will sing with me a lullaby
The stars do a slow tambourine dance in the sky
My blurred vision suddenly got a divine sight
You are the soul of my soul, my eternal light

There is a river gushing inside me
You are the fountain, you are my chi
I hear nothing but your sweet voice
You shimmer, you glisten and I rejoice

You, my darling are my inner sun
You are the song that I will hum
Today, tomorrow and forever
Your inner light I shall devour

You are the ink on my heart that will never blur
The calligraphy etched deep inside
You have fulfilled a deep void
You are my baby, my love, my joy, my pride

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English Poetry
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Comment by Apoorv on 22 May, 2008 @ 4:10 pm

another gr8 one… u seem to have a natural flair for romantic poems….
by the way… thanks a ton for ur comments on my poems.. especialy the one on “I’m not a poet”…

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Comment by pvvaidyanathan on 22 May, 2008 @ 4:15 pm

Motherhood is like that–its the greatest form of creativity that a human being can achieve–creating another being and nurturing him or her. No wonder then, that you have found your inner sun. Enjoy it thorogouhly.

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Comment by kalawati on 22 May, 2008 @ 4:29 pm

mam,
ur poem is gr8,specially urs romantic poems r very nice.

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Comment by sushil sarna on 22 May, 2008 @ 5:18 pm

mam
“you are the ink on my heart that will never blur” really,really these words are having hidden storm in a drop of love, beautiful.

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Comment by Shreyansh on 22 May, 2008 @ 5:27 pm

beeautifully written,sweeter than honey.
always a pleasure reading your work…
Cheerio.

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Comment by vijesh bhute on 22 May, 2008 @ 5:58 pm

really good.

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Comment by Vishvnand on 22 May, 2008 @ 7:18 pm

A very beautiful poem indeed. Your inner sun is shining forth very lovingly, majestically & creatively. You are consistently A+++…+ amongst us. Great…

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Comment by niks on 22 May, 2008 @ 7:44 pm

wonderful poem….lovely stuff..u just feel so good whn u read this…gr8 yaar…

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Comment by akash on 22 May, 2008 @ 8:00 pm

This is bubbling with beautiful emotions. Really very well written :)

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Comment by magiceye on 23 May, 2008 @ 11:58 am

wonderful tribute to a lover!

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Comment by renu rakheja on 23 May, 2008 @ 1:09 pm

Thanks everybody for your comments
@magiceye : This poem is for our daughter :)

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Comment by Geoff Warden on 1 June, 2008 @ 8:59 pm

You still hold the way of wordsmithing
your flow steals a reader and pulls inward,
very nicley done…
my challange to U the same as last year yet within a different view
The rose moon awaits

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