i walked
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Loading ...i walked on sand,
leaving my footprints behind.
i knew they wud be washed away
by the waves as they come to shore
i walked on land,
leaving places behind.
i knew they wud remain…
at the back of my mind.
i walked in the forest,
leaving the trees one by one
i knew they would keep growing
untill we cut them for humankind
i walked in the rains,
leaving the watery path
i knew it wud be gone
with the coming of the sun
i walked in the temple
leaving my worries behind
i knew god wud bless me
on every path in life
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This is a nice poem, I really liked the idea of varying backgrounds in walking and ondering upon the idea for the next three lines, nice thoughtfull poems, though I would suggest to change the line “untill we cut them for humankind
” it does not seem to blend with the remainder, but again poetry is person specific, you might continue with the line if you like it…
A very good poem. Unique idea expressed in a very unique manner, walking signifying treading in one’s life and the passage of time…..Beautiful.!
as you walk in the joureney of life remember that GOD walks with you in the form of your shadow and wipes out all the bad foot steps and guides to march forward that is what your well writen poem out lines
I am a very optimistic person who always finds a light at the end of the tunnel. Creative at heart, reminiscing the past but an eye on the future , intuitive, good hearted, striving for the best, caring towards all are some of the traits that would describe me.
good symbolism by way of walking on sand, passing by the trees in the forest and walking in the rain to make your point! Yes, God is everywhere and everytime!
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