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Intense Moments (13-18)

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English Poetry

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Gun placed on the shoulder

Eyes fixed accross border

Brother sees a brother

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14

Man and wife

False life

Silence breaks the glass

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15

He writes for her

amidst piles of papers

dried are the flowers

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16

Swallowed drought

rain showers

from elephant’s trunk

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17

his kingdom

my deepest valley

and highest mountain

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18

Pen dried

lips won-

that night

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PS – I realized that I can extend this Intense Moments series to much more than just passion. Other things can be intense too. So here it goes again….with a twist in the interpretation!

5 Comments

  1. pvvaidyanathan says:

    Yes, you are right, it can be extended to other things too. Good one, I liked the man and wife, false life, silence breaks the glass line. There are a lot of such marriages, empty, duty bound, and dragging on, going nowhere.

  2. sushil sarna says:

    ” whatever you have written that has touched the soul of life.” very nice.

  3. vijesh bhute says:

    i think that you have expressed the facts with a grace.its so true.

  4. prem puneet says:

    प्रीति की कविता सचमुच सघन अनुभवों के पलों से बुनी रचना है। शब्द थोडे, मार्मिकता भरपूर्। Each bit of the poem impresses.Situation in life between a Husband and wife is real.”His kingdom” corelates the tragedy in relations.Pen dried.. that night and Drought are nice too.

  5. very nice….the 15th one is beautiful..

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