First Rains
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Amid the tantrums of blazing debut rains,
With the coalesce of drops with air in the soil,
Diffuses an aroma, bewilders the souls,
Intoxicates even the venomous snakes and makes us toil.
That rocking of the clouds by the winds,
Mothers melodious thunders and lightening,
Exacerbate a stable soul and reverberates the minds,
Makes even the statues vibrate when they start flowing.
The Sun is erased and the sky is painted grey,
The trees rejuvenate and the earth is covered with blue.
Happy meagre limbs splashing with bigger gazing in dismay.
Voracious chatak extinguishing her thirst, so slow!
Hallowed deity in all praises to play the Godfather,
For the waterless standing crops, so lonely!
Holidays are gone with the death of the summer,
Inverting the faces but making the air, so friendly!
Fills the empty earthen pots, empty for long!
Feeds the bellies of pitiable thin mortals.
Makes koyal welcome the rains with a song,
Rides us to a splendid world through a portal.
By, Vijesh Bhute
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Amazing piece of imagination, needs lot of observation to think from this prospective. truely fundoo bro.
Very good…
You have a great potential to be a poet par excellence…
Just keep the flames burning…Take out time and keep writing.
Look forward to your upcoming works…
All the best…
i am a young innovative poet with lot of thougths intruding my mind and with a clear ambition in my mind.i love to use my pen rather than my mouth.i have been encouraged by a few prizes at the college level and i am yet to meet the world outside. I am enjoying the new life at iitk where acknowledgement does pour from the sky. i hope i continue my hobby and take it to a new level..
You’ve created some great imagery…
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