Written in the snow

Oh my love,

A whole year’s gone,

Since you left me,

I’m still forlorn

 

Last winter now,

We were one,

But come summer,

You said I’m done

 

My words of love,

Written in the snow,

Did summer heat

Cause them to flow?

 

Should we have met?

When spring was here?

Maybe then,

You’d still be near…..

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Comments

nice one..reminds me Khalil Gibran..

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A beautiful poem, so poignant, so touching. Alas, life is such. If only it weren’t…….

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excellent………..no words to describe.what a poem.i am really lucky.

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very good poem. Kudos to poet. keep it up.

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awwwwww…..or maybe this spring he’ll appaer out of no where like the bloom of flowers!

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Small enough but very sweet. It’s really good.

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Reminds me
“to meet, to know, to love and then to part
is the sad tale of many a human heart”
S.T.Coleridge
good work

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nice…… u’ve put across the pain and regret… and the ever torturing…..”if only…”

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